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Sunday, January 27, 2008
I scream aloud,
But no one hears a sound.
No one can hear what i say,
No one sees life my way.
A desire to carve my own road,
To silently unlock the code,
Read my mind's every word,
Fly away like a bird.
How it is to have a wing,
I want to feel everything.
Walk a mile in the rain,
Live life like there is no pain.
I want to show that i really do care,
My deepest emotions i want to share,
Dissolve boundaries, break walls,
Reach out anytime someone calls,
Without expectations,wanting to give,
Make a painting of the life that i want to live.
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Writing comments here has become my favorite pastime... commenting as a career?? you know archana you must put up a poll asking if people think so too...After all this is my blog...its like my stage...your like the owner of the theatre..
And i know this is breach of contract...but our readers must be told the truth, its high time....
ARCHANA IS A JAIL INMATE
such talent behind bars you say?
think Akon, think Jeffrey Archer , well the great Mahatma!!!
"dissolve boundries,break walls"
thats what every inmate wants to do...but hey!!! you shouldn't be this grumpy..you have an internet connection atleast...you couldn't get a better window to the world!!
wanna share your deepest emotions?...try emoticons...very useful tool!!!....;)
Vivek Abraham said...
January 30, 2008 at 10:05 PM
This one is the best of the lot!!.... it rhymes too...ever so often the message is lost in the struggle to rhyme!!...
i have no idea why you feel so caged...taking ur poetic licence and speeding eh?...heh
But if its truly how you feel...then its beautifully put... to reach out when someone calls..few people are willing to do it..and some don't have the opportunity to do it!!...life is strange...
I hope to see poems of liberation from you someday!!
Vivek Abraham said...
January 30, 2008 at 10:12 PM
thudl: Irrespective of the abundant freedom we have..we often remain slaves of our own conscience...
And of course..this blog belonging to you is as true as the fact that your comment-reading "fan club" exists..all hail the the funniest man on the planet...blah!!
Archana said...
January 31, 2008 at 10:07 PM
Reflective, less abstract, not 'Archana style' :-)
Karan said...
February 1, 2008 at 6:57 PM
Letting our souls soar high and free is what most of us want but then there is an equal happiness when you see that smile on the ones you love too. It calls for a balancing act :)
nice verses.
Arv said...
March 25, 2008 at 9:17 PM