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Tuesday, May 27, 2008
She saw a lone star, in the night sky,
And she thought it looked so beautiful.
She had often heard people say,
"It is easier said than done",
But somethings, she thought,
Were easier done than said.
Perhaps,
Falling in love was one of them.
She fell in love with the star,
Just for making her feel this way.
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...another lovely bright star, and,
another reminiscing poetic soul...
I can tell where those words came from... Cheer up and Have a nice day...
take care...
Arv said...
May 27, 2008 at 1:17 PM
Gone are the days when i had to meditate for hours before i made sense outta what u've written.
This ones got class, it deals with the commonest of poetic subjects, yet its told with a uniqueness and complexity which makes it a master piece!
great going, you've certainly come of age! your an amateur no more!
Vivek Abraham said...
May 28, 2008 at 6:12 PM
And then, on a planet circling that star, a being - an intelligent alien, glanced at some distant star - a lonely speck - what we call the Sun. For a moment, the alien entertained an impossible thought - that there might be another planet circling this star, the sun, that was rippling with life. He shrugged it off, returning to do his alien work. He would think about it later.
Anonymous said...
June 3, 2008 at 8:22 PM
:)
Very sweet.
Sweet and simple. I like very much :)
It would be interesting to hear what you would have titled these pieces if you were to title them. Let me know if you ever decide to!
little green mango said...
June 18, 2008 at 5:07 PM
Nice one. Really good. I gotta come back and check your nxt one.
And hey graffitimyhrt, did the clean take your brains as well bfore going back?:)
RiverSoul said...
July 4, 2008 at 6:52 PM